Turtle, Jellyfish & Crab
By John
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This narrative by John is part of the Metadesigning for Children project (see a summary) with Hyaesook, Dan.
Approach
- To challenge the usual 'top-down' reading convention in which narrator is in full control of a complete story.
- (n.b. whereas 'education' suggests a one-way flow, Dysgu (Welsh) can mean either 'learning' or 'teaching').
Format
- The Left-Hand page would normally contain mainly visual imagery, colours and appealing puzzles.
- The Right-Hand page would normally consist of texts, notes and links to additional references elsewhere.
- Together they would offer a safe, playground space to tackle big, difficult issues, concepts and questions.
An Example
- N.B. as the project currently has no illustrator, there are no images on this version's left-hand panel.
DRAFT TEXT FOR A CHILDREN'S + ADULT's BOOK
Mainly for the Child | Mainly for the (adult) narrator |
Long, long, long, long, long ago. | Don't you just love it when kids say they are BORED?? |
Long before time began... | What would they say if YOU said you were bored? ;-) |
Long before the first | Fortunately, kids love crazy ideas that challenge them... |
Nothing happened. | Did a bored Universe really begin from NOTHING? |
Absolutely nothing. | If we keep adding ZEROs to ZEROs will we ever get to ONE? |
Absolutely nothing happened. | Mmm…darkness everywhere until the Big Bang? |
To be honest, not even NOTHING happened. | Surely, going from nothing to something is UNTHINKABLE? |
drab colours were everywhere.... | Maybe - but this doesn’t make it IMPOSSIBLE |
It was like living at the very bottom of the sea. | Ever had a Sherlock moment when you suddenly light up? |
....well, this is the boring part of the story... | Charles Peirce called this abductive reasoning because the |
It was as DARK...SILENT...and SLOW as could be. | solution came from NOWHERE (i.e. beyond the problem space). |
So HOW did you and I get here, today? | 0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0+0=1?!! - what, REALLY?!! |
(From NOTHINGNESS to SOMETHINGNESS?)... | Yes, really. Quantum boffin Peter Rowlands did the maths... |
WHO might know the answers? | |
And WHAT QUESTION should we ask? | Maybe this would make sense to young kids… |
Shall we peep into the silent darkness | …their curiosity can help us to understand the meaning of life. |
that existed before time itself? | |
We might imagine a Turtle, a Crab and a Jellyfish | Using language creatively can reveal hidden opportunities. |
but these were creatures of the future. | If we think something's impossible we say it's 'unthinkable'. |
Therefore they did not YET exist. | Wiseman’s Luck Generator make MIRACLES more thinkable. |
So it was a great surprise when the Turtle | |
moved its head. | We tune into unnoticed things when they become ‘relevant’. |
Then it spoke in a sad voice. | Quantum physicist David Bohm turned 'relevance' into the verb |
"Nothing happens down here. I'm so BORED" | to relevate as a way to describe how one sub-atomic thing |
"I'm bored, too", said the Crab in a lazy voice. | lifts, or illuminates another thing into existence. |
"Why don't we do something?" | |
"Bet you're not as BORED as I am", said | How can humans make things exist? |
" Jellyfish. "Somebody needs to DO something". | Bishop Berkeley said we exist when others notice us. |
"Well, what do you WANT to do?" said Crab. | FOOTNOTE: the African word Ubuntu explains this better. |
"I'm not bothered", replied the Jellyfish. | It’s easy to go along with everybody but self-reinforcing trends |
"...I'll go along with whatever YOU want to do." | EITHER make good things better OR bad things worse. |
..."And I'll do what YOU want to do", said Crab | Many are trained to wait for other people to act. |
"I've had enough of this", said Jellyfish, | Many refuse to do the right thing until others are doing it. |
slowly drifting back to her corner. | This is because we underestimate our influence in the world. |
Crab looked at the Turtle. "It's your fault. | |
"YOU complained you were bored. | Optimism may help us to reason more auspiciously. |
"So YOU think of something! | ...together we can create a grammar of contagious optimism. |
"I'm too bored to think", said Turtle. | |
"But I'll do whatever you decide". | |
"Same here", said Crab. "Wake me up | |
when you've got a proper plan." | CHILDREN can help adults to reimagine the future. |
...This conversation is so BORING." | ADULTS can learn from the questions kids ask. |
All this made Jellyfish feel sad. "How can we | Together we can ask better questions. |
escape from NOTHINGNESS?" she asked. | Here are a few types of question to think about |
"Well, if that's how you feel", said Turtle, | Climate change has shown the need for better questions. |
"It will be a bad idea to do anything". | So instead of behaving AS IF we were causing it, |
"Wake me up when you have a proper plan. | we kept asking WHETHER we were causing it... |
He let out a deep sigh. | Instead of asking HOW to make behaviour change fun |
"I will continue to lounge around". | We just assumed that greener lifestyles would bring pain. |
Then Jellyfish saw a tiny, dancing, twinkling thing. | Now that it is harder to deny climate change |
What was it? What might it have been? | many adults now say it is too late to do anything. |
The Crab looked at it very closely. | Unfortunately, they are right - but ONLY IF we all believe them. |
"Yuk! I don't like the look of that!" | |
"It could be something really BAD." | |
Then the Jellyfish had a longer look. | |
"It's only a tiny bubble dancing in the light" | |
But Jellyfish couldn't take her eyes off it. | Young kids are the NEW KNOWERS who learn (see diversity) |
As she looked more closely it changed | without being hindered by the inauspicious reasoning |
Glinting in a sunbeam was the tiniest | used by many adults. |
of tiny creatures. | They create their realities from the shared experience |
"I think it's a tiny fish! she shouted" | of each moment... |
The Turtle and the Crab just stared. | |
"There's no such thing", said Crab. | |
"Fish don't exist, yet..." | Wittgenstein's notion of aspect dawning notes that |
"I saw it, but it was horrible", said Turtle... | we take time to interpret or recognise things we see. |
..."We mustn't go near it." | In making sense of confusing experiences we may |
But Jellyfish decided to follow it. | create new opportunities. |
As it swam it shimmered and glittered | |
She saw the purest colours: | |
LEMON and TURQUOISE and VERMILLION | |
"Against the murky waters of the deep | |
"It's beautiful! she shouted... | |
...we are so lucky to see this". | |
"Wearing brilliant colours is a BAD idea" said | The scissors/paper/stone game shows us that we all |
Turtle. "It hasn't even got a shell to hide in..." | have unique abilities that are incomparable. |
"Well, I wish I was a tiny fish", said Crab. | Fuller's Trim-Tab idea was designed to show how we |
"then I could swim anywhere.... | can all make a difference, however powerless we think we are. |
"...without a care in the world. | |
"I've had a brilliant idea"said Jellyfish..... | |
What would YOUR brilliant idea be...? | What would YOUR brilliant idea be...? |